Iswarya, Amazing hook! Really pulled me in and made me laugh because it puts people’s situations into perspective – everyone has at least one parent that is concerned for the well being of their child – it definetly pulls on the emphathy strings. Furthermore, your thoughts were well organized and systematic. I was, for the most part, able to understand your approach to the problem by stating that UF should buy off-campus housing and provide students with semester leases. Just to clarify – this would be a service that is paired with UF Housing? Overall, great pitch annd information, looking forward to hearing your ideas develop!
You did a great job with your video! I like how your hands were constantly moving and you were not just standing there like a statue. You provided a lot of really good information that could be used to help sway your audience. I believe you have a really good solution to the off campus housing problem at the University of Florida.
Iswarya,
ReplyDeleteAmazing hook! Really pulled me in and made me laugh because it puts people’s situations into perspective – everyone has at least one parent that is concerned for the well being of their child – it definetly pulls on the emphathy strings. Furthermore, your thoughts were well organized and systematic. I was, for the most part, able to understand your approach to the problem by stating that UF should buy off-campus housing and provide students with semester leases. Just to clarify – this would be a service that is paired with UF Housing? Overall, great pitch annd information, looking forward to hearing your ideas develop!
Hi Izzy,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job with your video! I like how your hands were constantly moving and you were not just standing there like a statue. You provided a lot of really good information that could be used to help sway your audience. I believe you have a really good solution to the off campus housing problem at the University of Florida.